I hate the way you loved me
I hate the way you cared
I hate everything and the lies
I hate everything that is not there
I hate the way you lied to me
I hate the way you cut me deep
I hate you now and forever
So now let me fucking sleep
I hate the way you tore my heart out
I despise you for what you done
I hate the way you continuesly fibbed
I hate our love that had begun
I hate the way you cared
I hate the way you cut me deep
I hate the way you continuesly fibbed
SO FUCKING LET ME SLEEP!!
Author notes
Quote: He who lied and betrayed loved not at all
Quote written by me , a little sad really but this poem truly came from my heart and not the mind.
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Comments
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i really liked this itwas sad and very emotion filled.
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Ahhh, a bad man, aren't they all sometimes though. i hope you find one who is good most of the time.
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wowe!!!
thats alotta hate right there... your emotions were raw and i can relate to some of the emotions there! good job! keep penning! >.<
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*lets you sleep*
wow you must relly hate the one who you trusted and loved good poem/song
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Yeah I did hate him, more enough I wanted him dead and erased from my life, but oh well all in the past, it was his loss and someone's gain, so like thank you kindly for your kind comment
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Delusional ~
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good.i like how the words flow.did this actually happen?
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Powerful words though starting most of the lines with "I hate" was too repetitive and took away from the message. Good luck in any case.
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Well done
honest,flows well I'll read more of your stuff.
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I feel that one. You and me too. Most of all, I hate the way you cut me deep. So true!
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