I know you only from afar
your hopes and dreams expressed in your words
Fears and past demons echo from your work
truthfulness draw's me to your heart
Author notes
"Almost Lover"
In a list
A contest entry
- Prompt 10 entries/ 30 words more or less by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended June 6, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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There is so much power within the written word...emotions flow and hearts are won...the keys the beat and the light it's glow...I really enjoyed this! thank you for sharing:f
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Thank you
Thank you yet again for making me feel good about my writing
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Aww that's lovely! It is true that many hearts are laid out here.. hopes, fears, dreams, demons...
This is a wonderful write hun! Perfect for that prompt!
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It is much easier to bear your soul here. I beleive most of us are more honest about ourselves with our online friends than ones in our immeadite life. -
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Yes.. a lot of us are.. then again, there are those who are complete frauds I've found too sigh...
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How wonderful...I have found some of my closes and best friend from here...far away yet always in my heart...how true it is...thank you for sharing your heart!
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Thank you
I know exactly what you mean my friend
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This is brilliant and i can so relate to your words. It is so funny that there are people so far away, yet you can feel such a connection with them. Well done for this and all the best for the contest.
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Thank you
Thank you so much. I agree especially on here that it is easy to feel a connection with others
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so many truths and so many lies can lie within the written words...upon a Internet you will find fears, past demons and echos of lonely hearts...such truths! good luck in contest my friend
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Thank you
Thank you so much. I have great love for many friends I only know online but I have also fallen for people on line as well.
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