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Submission

Drawing me into your web of deceit
luring me with your beauty
Creating the illusion of pleasure
as you ensnare my soul
I bow and call you Mistress

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    June 1, 2008

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    Now you just know I'm gonna love this one!! Yayyy for a bit of Mistress

    Excellent!! Very enticing she is too! Congrats on the silver!


    • buffsab99
      June 1, 2008
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      Thank you

      I was hoping you would like this one . My first write in sensual submission


  • mysticstorm gold member
    May 31, 2008

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    Well now, she is a desire of high price...beautifully written with a wonderful air of mystery...nicely creative take on the prompt...
    thank you for sharing!

    • buffsab99
      May 31, 2008
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      Thank you

      Thank you for your wonderful comment hun. This was a fun prompt to work with


  • Lonely Christina
    May 30, 2008
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    hehe


  • Angelflower
    May 30, 2008

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    Ooh.. this was really good brother..
    very sensual as well as dark..
    You did a good with the prompt..
    Best of luck..


    Angel

    • buffsab99
      May 30, 2008
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      Thank you

      Thank you so much baby sister . This was my first try at dark with sensual


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    May 30, 2008

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    SWEET~

    into her web of deceit

    luring beauty

    illusion complete

    a soul ensnared

    she is mistress...

    wow!

    i do love this poem...has a since of mystery and a little darkness

    good luck in contest!Cool

    • buffsab99
      May 30, 2008
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      Thank you

      Thank you so much. This was such a fun prompt to work with

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