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Your Web

Silently, insidiously
Weaving me
Into your seduction
I fell into you
Helpless
Drowning into
The depths of your heart
Laying vulnerable
Captive to your desires
Entranced and blended into you

A contest entry

Crediting Artist Temptation_by_Musical_Manipulators

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 31, 2008

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    Another great write that captures the picture so well!! Congrats on another bronze


  • mysticstorm gold member
    May 31, 2008

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    Lovely word choice and creativity...very nice in depth and meaning...a tangled web of desire...we do fall into easily...
    thank you for sharing!


  • MysticalRayne
    May 30, 2008

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    I really like where you took this prompt ~ wonderfully done "weaving me into your seduction" beautiful ~ best of luck in the contest

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