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Can You Handle It?

Flushed with my tears
rivers of them there.
There I leave my cares.
No general public allowed.
Only friends dare...


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  • reeseXtheXsoldier
    May 30, 2008
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    good.

    I love this, brovo!

  • goalsv
    May 30, 2008
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    Sounds like a wonderful peacful place.

    • 2lullabyhaven
      May 30, 2008
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      hahaaha yes, it's a place I go to retreat and lick my wounds hahaha God is my bestest of friends hahahaha so He meets me there always lol


  • individuality gold member
    May 30, 2008

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    ah we all need a place in mind where we can just curl up in and rock with the world, it is good to do so too, a good poem.

    • 2lullabyhaven
      May 30, 2008
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      yes we certainly do need that type of place, Ian, and we need a few, at least one, hahaha cozy friend to sit in there with us,you know what I mean? smile lol

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