Rising from the grasp
of her nightmares,
focused on faith of redemption,
leaving behind,
hell's consuming fires.
Demons of her past
laid to rest upon hope,
praying, for her soul
to fly,
into forgiveness.
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A contest entry
- 10/10 Quickie by buffsab99.
600 points, ended May 30, 2008, 8 entries
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Comments
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Ahhh now you just know I'm going to love this one!! The rising above the sins.. a topic I enjoy a lot!!
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Thank you ma'am.
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I loved this take on the prompt. Much different to mine
but very well done indeed!
Keep up the great work!
Hugz
Himler
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Thank you so much for your comment.
Linda
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Excellent
Great job with this write. I really like where you took it. Best of luck in this contest
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You're so good at these... need to get you off the darkness however... Dont' want you depressing yourself (LOL). Another talented and wonderful write...
Ken
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You're so sweet to me, thank you dear friend. It doesn't depress me really, to write dark, I look at it as just a prompt.
I appreciate your kind comments so much..
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