Moment's breath lifts you up as,
a war rages from the depths.
Vying for a sliver of self,
you may slip in the tide.
Illusions wallow about your strength,
attempting to stifle your freedom.
Standing on the edge of horizons,
arduous life explosion.
Elude the demons,
that haunt your sleep.
Author notes
Picture prompt:
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A contest entry
- 10/10 Quickie by buffsab99.
600 points, ended May 30, 2008, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Cool! I loved your take on the prompt! I especially like the lines:
"Illusions wallow about your strength,
attempting to stifle your freedom. "
Great Job!!
Keep up the great work
Hugz
Himler
PS: Congratulation on earning a bronze!
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Great
Great take on this prompt. I like where you went with this. Best of luck in this contest
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