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My Hide Away

Beyond my inner doors
after the locks are secure
escape from the hustle
worries of the day.
Serenity is found…

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  • Fourthaxis
    May 30, 2008

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    Very succinct..... (I mean that as a compliment) The first line was very beautiful, has a lot of depth. Nice write!
    God Bless!
    Anansey


  • reeseXtheXsoldier
    May 30, 2008
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    good!

    bravo and good luck!