White Noise-
In an eruption of
Applause as they grip your
Aura and try to take your image.
Brace yourself
It's going to be a bumpy road
That you'll live to regret when
You turn thirty five and the put you out to sea.
Welcome to tinsel-town. [ Leave all the little people behind. ]
Author notes
credit for picture goes to:
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I'm not entirely sure why I got this image from the promt, but as soon as I saw it I thought rising star.
A contest entry
- 10/10 Quickie by buffsab99.
600 points, ended May 30, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is, as far as I can tell, very true. Well-put, the whole idea of the savagery of the entertainment business.
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Ok, so because I'm contentious - I like the first stanza alone with the last line. It's metaphorical & strong enough on it's own. Lovely, lovely work as always, my Daemon friend!
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this really is a good write, not as good as some of your later works, your latest i mean hun, but alas it is good,
keep penning,all my love,
kitty xxx -
Excellent
This was a great write for this prompt. Well Done. Best of luck in this contest
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