tilt your feilds as you wish
for if you do not die happy
they are the one to perish
without access to paradise
do not refuse him
no matter the circumstance
if two people are alone
the third company is the devil
three times he can call you back
and dismissal is an easy task
if you wish to do the same
you need more grounds than cruelty
if you wish to leave them
there is another way simply
give them what you're worth
they'll let you leave then
if born unto an unwanting family
the fate for you is not so clear
suffer living out your life
or die upon the spot
if you are permitted to live
then they must treat you well
otherwise they can not enter
into that eternal bliss
no rights for forcing
marrige on you the
grounds are clearly
set in stone for all
to read or ignore
as they see fit
you have rights
that is a given
though they hold
a rung one higher
to that of your own
paradise is at
your feet though
the people can not
prosper if they let
you lead them
Author notes
again no offense intended this is just for school....
you can call me crazy but tell me why you think so.....
Comments
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oh cool i can edit what i said ....srry im new and this is facsinating
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thank you for the comment... i like your poem verry well, a bit hard to follow at times but my lack of sleep is probably to blame... dont fret ranting is FUN...heheheaaahh well happy writing..o god i sound old...NE way i realy liked it please continue your writing
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Powerful write, my friend!! This is great...enjoyed the read very much (and no offence taken by the way )
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wow this is really good,
really powerful, you can really read your emotion,
like an open story in this poem,
keep penning,
all my love, your friend and poetess,
kitty
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