Oh God
you improvise the glow at sunrise
tagging it with a dawn
it is a malarkey of the nature
rotating it into invisibility
by the sundown
the start imparting you is fanatically awaited
impounding without the inkiness in it
Oh God...
Author notes
dawn...
In a list
A contest entry
- favourite things PIF by Nicolette.
1200 points, ended June 1, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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i was just talking about this yesterday and how i wanted to write a poems about it!!!
this was very nice...
and maybe now i have the inspiration to go about and write it.
'you improvise the glow at sunrise
tagging it with a dawn"
that was my favorite line out of all of them...
its nice to know that dawn is not taken for granted...
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As all your poetry is, I looked up at the picture and your poem is so appropriate. You are a credit to your talent with your ease at free verse. Once again I love your credit that you give God in your poetry.
Many best regards,
Jennifer
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Wonderful write! I love the line 'you improvise the glow at sunrise'--- great wording. You make me want to take the time to watch the sunrise more often!
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Very nice~
So many mornings I am rushed to get to work and I do not take time to notice the beautiful painting God has placed before me...I love your words, they are wonderfully written. -
And in the beginning there was light... this is where this poem of yours took me. Well done... what a wonderful tribute to the big Light... thank you for the entry.
~ Nicolette
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You are definitely a dawn fanatic, it possesses you.
Marlene -
This is a very heartfelt poem. Great job.
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Exactly!...I love the sunrise and the 'feel' of the sunrise here in your poetry! Best of luck in the contest. Peace, Rhonda
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The sunrise is one of my favorite things as well. Along with the sunset. A very nice write. Good luck in the contest.
Kelli
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