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Say Goodbye

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It’s been too long
Without you near,
Seems so wrong
To leave you here,
From halfway to heaven
And a quarter way to hell.

But I know you’ve got to go,
And yeah you know that
For the longest time
We’ve felt the pain.
And I don’t want to have
To say goodbye again
No I don’t want to have
To say goodbye…


To you, the song in my head,
The irony in my day
And the warmth in my bed.
Freedom comes, just not today
As you leave through the backdoor
Not turning to say any more.
You made your silence the key
To every single piece of me.

Because for the longest time
We’ve felt the pain.
Pushing, pulling, tormenting
Our way through the rain
Over the hill, through the arch
To even more of the same.

And I don’t want to have
To say goodbye again,
No I don’t want to have
To say goodbye in vain.



[[Spoken word, haunting]]
I fear the echoes and foreign noises,
Seems your absence swept my faith away.
And a vase of dying flowers can do nothing today
For the emptiness deep within our foundations.

[[Slight overlapping of previous verse]]
And as this cold night falls
You’ll think of me as I think of you,
All passion dissipates from our broken bond
As our violin melody absconds.

I don’t want to say goodbye again,
I thought you felt the same.

Author notes

So I started this ages ago and God I don't even remember who it was about (I wasn't exactly in the best states back then) but I finished writing this when I was at a persons house... Yah. Understood? No? IDC =)

NB: [[ ]]'s are cue thingos... They're not part of the lyrics lol.

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Comments


  • Maedes
    May 31, 2008

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    keep your faith, hope and trust that there will be no goodbye
    great poem


  • Ravenblood
    May 30, 2008

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    Woah, very nice my darling. The flow and ebb of it was almost constant the whole way through with only a little hiccup.
    Good content and I loved the repeditiveness of it all.

    Love you my darling Angel.

    XoXo Claire-Anne XoXo


    • Girl With Guitar silver member
      May 31, 2008
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      Hey hi. I added a few notes in the actual body. Where is the hiccup please?

      I love you forever