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Floating on these notes

floating on notes,
that suit every mood
and each occassion that arises

in no particular area
you are always near

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When im down, i always listen to music it always soothes me, i believe music can match any feeling and the good thing about my sercet place is that it is mobile, i can have it anywhere while i am alone

just listening....content

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  • conniev1 silver member
    June 25

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    Nicely done.

    You did a great job with the contest. I myself see a lot of potential here for a longer poem. Although this little poem, does show your way with music, and its connection to you.I loved the title, and you make the music come to life, as if it's a being, not a thing. It's different from anything tat I would write, but it's a very interesting style that you have. Connie


    • Li snuffles
      June 26
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      i know what you mean about making the poem longer, but it was a contest with exactly 20 words lol

      thank you for your lovely comment

      .. lisa
  • pithyaplomb
    June 15
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    pretty much, genuine & perfection!


  • james119
    June 10

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    nicely done personification of music
    could also be used as a metaphor
    kind of a 'reversble jacket'

    I like it

    james


    • Li snuffles
      June 16
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      I'm really glad you liked it James

      thank you for your comment...xxx

  • A.z.a
    May 31

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    music has its own meditation to ones soul.. smartly taken on the prompt
    congrats for the bronze.. i truly like the simplicity of the write


  • Dreamana
    May 31
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    Congrats on the bronze. Music can be a truly powerful way of escaping.

    • Thank you very much

      yeah i know without music i dont think i'd be here today, i used it so many times to escape from reality and just to hear someone else signing of the sadness in their lives, makes you feel like someone understands what you are feeling.
  • oh, I see!

    Yup, I get it now. Bravo!
    • lol, i hope it is what you were looking for, its where i disappear to, without music i wouldnt be here today in a peaceful frame of mind i loved listening to "smile" by Michael Jackson when i was feeling down

      music can suit any mood its amazing...

      Lisa
  • A nice place to be when you want to be alone. Floating away in your music. Very nicely written. Good luck in the contest.
    Kelli
    • Thank you for your best wishes i hope it was what the author was looking for....

      lisa
  • hmmm...

    not sure it follows the prompt...but good work!

    • Thank you, well my special top secret place is when no one can find me and i am with my music, i thought that was what the prompt was

      sorry if it is wrong...

      glad you liked it tho'
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