floating on notes,
that suit every mood
and each occassion that arises
in no particular area
you are always near
Author notes
When im down, i always listen to music it always soothes me, i believe music can match any feeling and the good thing about my sercet place is that it is mobile, i can have it anywhere while i am alone
just listening....content
A contest entry
- TOP SECRET: exactly 20 words PIF by reeseXtheXsoldier.
525 points, ended May 30, 2008, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Very good write for a short one! You could try addind in some Capital Letters though, but that's just me being neurotic ;P I love the music-ness though thats always agood inspiration for poetry! Thank you for the enjoyable read!!!
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thank you for your comment
lisa..xx
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Nicely done.
You did a great job with the contest. I myself see a lot of potential here for a longer poem. Although this little poem, does show your way with music, and its connection to you.I loved the title, and you make the music come to life, as if it's a being, not a thing. It's different from anything tat I would write, but it's a very interesting style that you have. Connie
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i know what you mean about making the poem longer, but it was a contest with exactly 20 words lol
thank you for your lovely comment
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lisa
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You are very welcome. Connie
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pretty much, genuine & perfection!
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thank you very much
lisa..xx
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nicely done personification of music
could also be used as a metaphor
kind of a 'reversble jacket'
I like it
james
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I'm really glad you liked it James
thank you for your comment...xxx
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music has its own meditation to ones soul.. smartly taken on the prompt
congrats for the bronze.. i truly like the simplicity of the write
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Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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Congrats on the bronze. Music can be a truly powerful way of escaping.
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Thank you very much
yeah i know without music i dont think i'd be here today, i used it so many times to escape from reality and just to hear someone else signing of the sadness in their lives, makes you feel like someone understands what you are feeling.
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oh, I see!
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lol, i hope it is what you were looking for, its where i disappear to, without music i wouldnt be here today in a peaceful frame of mind i loved listening to "smile" by Michael Jackson when i was feeling down
music can suit any mood its amazing...
Lisa
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A nice place to be when you want to be alone. Floating away in your music. Very nicely written. Good luck in the contest.
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Thank you for your best wishes i hope it was what the author was looking for....
lisa
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hmmm...
not sure it follows the prompt...but good work!
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Thank you, well my special top secret place is when no one can find me and i am with my music, i thought that was what the prompt was
sorry if it is wrong...
glad you liked it tho'
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