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pallid inconsistencies

soft serenity
billows beneath blue moonlight
midst the warmth of day

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  • carole21
    May 30, 2008

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    nice

    nice haiku write . . liked "soft serentiy" and "billows beneath blue moonlight" . . good luck in the contest . .


  • Kelli Marie
    May 30, 2008

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    This is a good haiku...connecting well with the picture prompt. I thank you for sharing in the contest.
    Kelli