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Red ramate rampart

Sheltered within warmth
of impregnable wills

Encaged by a mesh
of superficial appearances

Herein lies the truth
of silent solitude

A contest entry

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  • Dreamana
    May 30, 2008
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    Great take on the prompt. nice work


  • MysticalRayne
    May 30, 2008
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    I really like this ~ best of luck in your contest ~ a most unique take on this prompt


  • reeseXtheXsoldier
    May 30, 2008
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    oh, yeah!

    that's what I'm talking about! Bravo! Off to the finals with you!


  • Kelli Marie
    May 30, 2008

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    A provoking piece of poetry. Hooks up well with the contest prompt. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
    Kelli