Sheltered within warmth
of impregnable wills
Encaged by a mesh
of superficial appearances
Herein lies the truth
of silent solitude
A contest entry
- TOP SECRET: exactly 20 words PIF by reeseXtheXsoldier.
525 points, ended May 30, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Great take on the prompt. nice work


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I really like this ~ best of luck in your contest ~ a most unique take on this prompt


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oh, yeah!
that's what I'm talking about! Bravo! Off to the finals with you!

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A provoking piece of poetry. Hooks up well with the contest prompt. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Kelli




