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~Midnight Solitude~

Suspended solitude casting spells,
of immensely needed self indulgence.
Moonlit particles bubble consequential whispers,
echoing in the wind.

Trancendual beings revel in midnight bliss.
Inner thoughts mimic speech through ravens deliverance;
darkness cloaks veils of pain, shielding from emotional turmoil,
                                                    if only momentarily....

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  • LadyDementia gold member
    May 31, 2008

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    Wow, a beautifully penned piece. The imagery is fantastic. Superbly penned. Thank you for your entry and good luck


  • buffsab99
    May 30, 2008
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    Excellent

    I love the flow of this. Best of luck my friend


  • Nevel
    May 30, 2008

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    Much of beautiful imagery, well done! like the line "inner thoughts mimic speech through ravens deliverance" very conpact worded. It is a pleasure to read it Good luck