Mr. Adonis flexes and struts
with his cocky attitude,
pumped up on a steroid high
he lays it all bare for you.
It's then that he notices
and thinks, *what the hell*,
seeing as those hormones
just kissed his manhood farewell.
*Don't fail me now*
he begged of the gods,
he prayed for a miracle
for his two peas and his pod.
Author notes
Pic prompt
A contest entry
- #83 Adult picture prompt by daviscth.
300 points, ended June 12, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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love this take hun
Paints some thoughts there his manhood farewell and his two peas and his pod LOL now thats a first with me haha
must remember that one
Good luck in the contest
Julie x
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Thank you lol I'm not sure where that phrase came from but there ya have it LOL I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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LMAO!!! That is hysterical!!!
Brilliant write.. oh my..
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I made myself laugh with this one lol I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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haha this is super funny! well done, great take on the prompt!
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I love these funny prompts she has! Such a welcome change. I appreciate your comment.
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So, steroids is my problem?... What a clever and witty write... It's so good I should have thought of it
... Seriously, you have a wonderful sense of this and have put together a truely humorous mini-masterpiece... Well done!
K
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LMAO, I wouldn't go around telling that! No peas and a pod for you, surely lol. Thank you for such a nice comment Ken, means alot.
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HaHa. This is hilarious. It is exactly the way that I make fun of these guys and the ones in professional sports. I loved it.
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Thanks Chucky..you should write for this contest as well. I know you'd do great!! She always has the best prompts lol C'mon go for it!!!
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OMG!!! The last two lines had me rolling!!! Thanks for posting this great take on the picture prompt.
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