Stains on the carpet, blood on his skin.
Pleased little grin as he slashes again.
Everything painted bright crimson red.
Checking a pulse is useless their already dead even one of thems missing a head.
Killing all even the two little kids along with there newborn kittens.
Laughing meniaclly as he swings his long blade.
Everything splattered red everything lying there dead.
Deaths smell lingers tainting the once sweet smelling air.
With a laugh of glee he takes off to flee to kill the next family.
All along now sits a little girl hidden in the closet lost to the world.
Looking at all the bloody mengled corpses that used to be part of her world.
Life draining from her face she laughs losing herself to the insanity as she watches the red flashing lights coming and her filled with misery.
im having a writers block month so yeah
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sure this is depressing... That little girl is the one who affected me much. Though she never got hurt, her life turned into a waste by this incident.... nicely written
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wow depressing when did you right this
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friday
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AMAZING i love it
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thanks u all =)
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Ghastly and gruesome... Dark but richly textured in detail and maddness... Well done.
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Oh my dear...this is scary! So dark and it makes me shadder. You made such a good picture to the reader. Great job.
Keep up the great work
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Dark
This is so dark and deep, sounds like the start of a great horror novel. Lots of suspense as to where you can take this write. Well done
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OH MY GOODNESS...THIS IS DARK...a well written acrostic...but sick....demented and something I hope I never run across again...
good write.
Kelli
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