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Discovery

Looking for acceptance in all the wrong places
searching for me in so many faces.
Yet all the while whispers echoed from my soul
to search deep within myself and life would be whole.
My path finally ending where I knew I belonged
from then on I knew that I couldn't go wrong.
Under God's gentle hands is my path sure and true
to make sense of my life through His eyes I now view.
With peace in my heart and Him by my side
I continue my journey and no longer hide.


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The moment you realized who you really are, did it surprise you, shock you, or have you always known!

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  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    June 3, 2008
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    Congratulations on winning the bronze trophy!!!

  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    June 2, 2008

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    Beautiful!!!

    Wishing you all the best!!!


  • Topaze
    May 30, 2008
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    I love it, well done and flows like magic! Thank you for your fine entry in the contest.

  • Bob Fox
    May 30, 2008

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    You know

    this fine piece somehow reminds me og song I once new. But I guess if God.s grace is merciful then song is certainly a guide to it.


  • Kelli Marie
    May 30, 2008

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    A great write that connects very well with the contest prompt. Your words flow like music. Very well written.
    Good luck to you.
    Kelli

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