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inside

inside
where nerves glow all neon-like
and restful rivers of red pass by
my world
encased in bone
inside

A contest entry

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  • Dreamana
    May 30, 2008
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    Well, when I was deciding what my secret place might be this never crossed me mind. Inspired.


  • reeseXtheXsoldier
    May 30, 2008

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    ooooooooh.

    atraight to the finals with you!


  • Kelli Marie
    May 30, 2008

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    I think this is a very unique and clever write. Very well write. I hope you do well in the contest. Good luck.
    Kelli