Like shadows
They slink through the darkness
All-knowing eyes
Gleaming in the moonlight
Crouching low
The hunt is on
Survival of the fittest
They follow their instincts
Loving and playful
Feared and lethal
Two separate worlds
One animal
The symbol of misfortune
And yet also of beauty
They pass through our world
The creatures of the night
Please tell me what you think
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very masterfully worded
i loved every line
great write
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Although I don't care much for cats they certainly have their niche in the orderly scheme of nature and amongst humans as well. Besides without the title, you could be describing certain members of our species too.
Sincerely,
Leo Long
ps. Thanks for reading and commenting on my work. I really do appreciate it.

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Descibes cats perfectly. Unless their like my cat who can never shut up. Excellent write!

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nice
a very nice write on cats . . you know them well . . liked "They follow their instincts" and "the symbol of misfortune" . . good job
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Yes they are. Sneaky little poops they are. You got to so watch out for them cause they will ATTACK from nowhere...lol A great write.
Kelli

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cute
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