I miss your hugs
I miss your smile
I miss your laugh
I miss your jokes
I miss your smell
I miss your happiness
I miss your sarcasm
I miss your driving
I miss your phone-calls
I miss your conversations
I miss your kisses
I miss your strength
I miss your advice
I miss your warmth
I miss your safeness
I miss your voice
I miss your personality
I miss your attitude
I miss your generosity
I miss your chivalry
I miss your kindness
I miss your car
I miss your house
I miss your family
I miss your friends
I miss your love
I miss you
Please tell me what you think
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I really like this,
it good.
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hey i know i comment this already so im just giving u a message I miss u and I wont be able to talk to u in a week tomorrow will be my last day with signal (going camping and its going to suck monkey balls)
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I think I got the message..lol. In truth, there are people I know who evoke exactly the same thoughts from me. You were just a bit more diligent in listing the things you miss than I would have been.
Sincerely,
Leo Long
ps. Thanks for reading and commenting on my work. I do appreciate it very much.
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D-A-M-N
that all i got to say to this one i really like this one really good write i wounder who this one is about
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WoW! Great write. Really does show that there is sort of a feeling of emptieness that you feel with this person gone. Of course, theres one thing I have against this poem (I'm sorry to say) but 'I miss your car I miss your house' seems to say 'I dont care that much about you but rather your stuff' but you fixed it with how you miss this persons personality and etc etc. Bravo.
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Ah..this is inded a dep cry of the loving heart..and you are very honest while describing the miss..I love it ..well done...
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When we miss someone, there is so much to miss. It is more than just their eyes, and tenderness. Soft touch and gentleness. We miss their smell and laughter, and the happily ever after. A nice write.
Kelli
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