Break it, bitch.
Go ahead.
I'm not scared of you.
There's nothing you can do to me
That ain't been done before.
Rip it.
Tear it out.
Shred it.
I'm used to having stiches.
I like the way it feels
Every time you jerk them out.
Guess what.
Your turn.
Author notes
from the Innocence Dead collection. Poem 11 of 15.
A contest entry
- I'm a Bitch, I'm a Lover? by Poetic Obscenity.
1000 points, ended July 6, 2008, 41 entries
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Comments
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Wow, scary write. I like the depth of this poem and your emotions of anger are strong. I liked how you used imagery, but where so, that the reader could think of it's own. Great job and good luck in the contest.
josh
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thanks... IDK if it's right for the contest... but that's how I take on bullies... and ex-boyfriends haha
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i like the depth of the feelings you have used in this poem, i like the heart ach, and its kinda wierd that pain is good, but thats cool, good luck in the contest and keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy
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Awesome. I find this very intriguing...
You've got an amazing piece full of Fuck yous and paybacks. There's really nothing better.
You kept a brilliant poetic flow throughout the piece and that makes it great. Simply amazing.
It's very short and yet it says ever so much. Great job.
Thank you for your entry in my contest and goodluck. -
pretty good
Different, but compelling. Direct and to the point. I liked it alright. Grade-B. Sincerely, Janjan
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I used to blame the "she devil" that my ex would date, but it wasn't her fault. It was his. She was just someone who like what I did. He was the one who betrayed me. ("haveing?" take that e out)...lol
Kelli
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