Devoured;
swallowed up
in the mouth
of an undiscovered world
holding tightly
to a lingering soul
glowing
among beds of blue
and skies of silver
Author notes
**credit pic
I personally like the last stanza I wrote...I usually don't "toot my own horn" but I like the imagery of lying in bed, holding tight to your soul that walks/dances etc. in this new world.
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A contest entry
- While I Sleep (picture prompt) *judged tomorrow* by delightfulmess.
450 points, ended May 31, 19 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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OUTSTANDING TAKE!!!!
WOW loved this thankyou for entering my contest.
Delila
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Thank you for the HM. very much appreciated...this was a really fun contest...im honored to have been a part of! Thank you
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