moon so bright
it supresses the night
Keep on a light
for me as I sleep.
the darkness holds fear
but I hold you near
your presence is sheer
comfort and peace.
I feel myself drifting
your warm body is shifting
moonlight is slipping
through the curtains crease
luminous love glows
as sound slumber unfolds
now only God knows
what dreams we are to seek.
Author notes
2.moonlight
A contest entry
- While I Sleep (picture prompt) *judged tomorrow* by delightfulmess.
450 points, ended May 31, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Best Prewrites From May 2008 by amaranthine lover.
900 points, ended July 1, 2008, 48 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Moonlight by crivanea.
300 points, ended October 4, 2008, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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the darkness holds fear
but I hold you near
your presence is sheer
comfort and peace.
fav stanza..best of luck in the contest -
Dreams are so real at times
I love to snore and dream and the high pressure steam in the brain just tickle away.
Life then really looks wonderful.
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I love the formation of this poem. It falls so easily off the tongue with great imagery. Well written
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this is one that could easily be turned to a song. were gonna havta collaborate togetha ma
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interesting, thanks for entering.
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Lovely... This is a really good flowing piece.
Excellent take on the prompt.
Thank you for entering my contest.
Delila -
your words are tenderful weaved in so much deep immagery bringing the beauty of the love around...well done my friend...
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