You're my masterpiece
You are the missing shade of my favorite color
The last bit of sunrise
Mixed with a salty breeze
The tune in my head
The music inside I can't define
You're my symphony
You take me away
Swept up in a prism of starlight
That stretches from you to me
I can't escape
I'm lost deep inside your eyes
And they're every color that I've ever seen!
I dont need the light on
to see the very essence of you
I can close my eyes
and feel every breath within you
The bluest ocean
and reddest rose
a dangerous combination
as far as lovers go
I never should have given you a try
Because now I'm addicted
and its much too late to run for my life
All the pieces of you
stemming from your heart
like a beacon of light in this life of dark
A contest entry
- ♥Heart ♥Art ♥photo♥promt by peridotPixi.
390 points, ended June 1, 2008, 5 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Nicely done. There are some great images and well-crafted lines that made me read this again. There is an honesty to this and a warmth that really effects your reader.
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i really love the depth of this poem, i love the feelings you have put into this piece and its wonderful, thank you for the entry and good luck in my contest, keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy
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