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Nicole

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Nicole – Ian

Happy dancing round the pole
Sweet sixteen that’s my Nicole
Every day is just the same
Wants to enter any game

Sun or rain the same to her
Children all to her defer
She’s the leader of the pack
Tag her first she’ll tag you back

People seek her company
Love this girl she’s fancy free
From the stranger first to meet
To the neighbour down the street

Nicole has a constant dream
In her eye a certain gleam
Someday in a future bright
She will marry Mister Right

She’ll have children wait and see
And she’ll bring them up to be
Fancy free without a care
Nicole wants her joy to share

“© Ian Grice 2008”

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  • wave picture frame
    June 1, 2008
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    I think i'm in love with this girl after reading this. great job here! it flows so naturally. i particularly love the lines:
    From the stranger first to meet
    To the neighbour down the street
    this poem feels very personal, yet it's about someone else. keep up the great poetry friend. -Jamie