You, are
everywhere
in the taste
of salt;
in the pulsation
of the heavens;
in the song of flowers
when in bloom, and
in the twinkling stars
of the universe
but, its Your Love,
long before - that excites;
knowing -
even I
am special,
within
Your everywhere
Author notes
Within 'everywhere' I am grain and cosmos alike.
In a list
A contest entry
- It is amazing.... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended June 12, 2008, 4 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Congratulations ...
on this Gold too! I am glad that you see the impact of your poetry on many souls.
Love
Myra
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Well I can see that beauty of the God and HIS grace in every word of your write..thanks for sharing such a wonderful piece...
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Ah Frans ...
I am glad you are safely in Germany ...!
I am sure your flight inspired this ... What a wondrous poem ...
Gold here, my friend ...
Love to you and please read the workshop product ... your light is shining within His ...
Love
Myra
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Ahh frans
this is very touching and it sings to heart.
i hope this is another winner.
Dolores xx
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The humbleness of the author has not gone unnoticed. I hope your reward is worthy of the words.
Sincerely,
Leo Long
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Simply Maahvahlous!!!
I love this melodic and metaphoric marvel!!! 
Wishing you the best of luck in this contest!!! Peace, Cyn
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Speechless within Your Everywhere - what a great line that so beautifully shows the awe and humbling effect of the greater power among us all.
Well done. I loved this. ~Pamela
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Excellent!
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'even in a moment tossed with sadness,
I can feel you there,
can you touch me?
the love within our hearts
it beats as one
could I be more
than just the ripple on a pond
or the birth of a slow rising sun?'
Love, Chez
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