Colorful obsession
washes away depression
Rainbow creation
Adoring adulation
Author notes
9 words
A contest entry
- Three by sheltered.
600 points, ended May 31, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Very nice. It makes me think of people creating their own rainbows to get away from their depression. Then that makes me remember childhood days of spraying the hose into the air to make rainbows
totally made me happy, you're right. great write and thanks for sharing.
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I love the flow and sound of this and perfect rhyme
but it would always bother me
having a short poem with a the same word repeated...
fix that if it bothers you too.
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fixed, I failed to realize that I repeated it also. thank you for helping me realize it.
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