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Song For The Soul

Moon's lament.
Dawn's requiem.
Noon's canticle.
Sunset's serenade.
Eclipse's hymn.
Twilight's anthem.

Sing thy song.

Author notes

I chose the lyrics. *smiles*

"In every moment there's a reason to carry on-"

From the song "Whenever I Call You Friend"
by Kenny Loggins & Stevie Nicks-

A contest entry

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Comments

  • wow... I must say. You deffinitly caught my attention... what a lovely poem, short and get's to the point. Well done, well done.
  • It is very much so spiritual i agree. Very relaxing seeing as i'm sitting in class stumbling on writing a conclusion for a paper in my college class.... grrrr. thanks for putting me in a better mood.
    ~shiningstars

  • Desire gold member
    June 3

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: Song For The Soul
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ after inhaling Your words, I was getting a reference to the Circle of Life but seeing a flash of evolution...like Creation to now...Briefly shown a scene from The Fifth Element when LeeLoo was looking at images to get acquinted with what is happening with the world She shed tears~
    I'm hearing a song~ being shown a finger pointing to You sounds like a meditation type of music- I think it is by bjork
    Hearing what sounds like: You are the Key
    reference to Vigor- Sustenance
    but key in another person's Life- who mentions there is No Life
    without You~ feels like a spiritual connection
    Hopefully that makes sense
    Powerful images You have brought forth

    These words grabbed and pulled~
    Twilight's anthem.
    Strong Voice spoken~

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~