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Hello down there

Hello down there
As I watch and stare
Wondering, o where?
You may end up tonight

If all goes as planed
God forbid it be my hand
But some one night stand
Yes, that would be just fine

But maybe love I’ll find
And in a few years time
You should never mind
Ever wondering out again

After long you won’t care
And then again I’ll stare
Wondering, o where?
Did you lose your vitality and life

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A relationship only men can really understand I must say lol

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  • daviscth silver member
    May 30, 2008

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    OMG!! I think I like your note more than the entry. LOL. Thank you for posting these awesome words.


  • Havoc Bloodscourge
    May 29, 2008
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    GENIUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!

    -Havoc