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Ink

I wrote my dreams upon your skin,
A portrait I made with ink.

A contest entry

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  • Desire gold member
    June 3, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: Ink
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ after inhaling Your words, I wanted to say I kept counting 13Words, now my eyes could play tricks on me so please correct me if I am wrong~ This contest calls for 15Words
    I'll be reading all the entries and always come back to read every entry again before placement~ I will recount again-
    Now back to Your piece- I kept getting word: tattoo as I read but hearing name: Johnny-Jonny
    Getting word: parchment and also baking reference...
    sounds like apple turnover-
    Strange as it may sound...
    Nudged to mention: You have Class... hearing that phrase
    also Keep up the Good Work
    Hopefully that makes sense
    Powerful images You have brought forth

    These words grabbed and pulled~
    ...dreams upon your skin
    Beautiful Voice spoken~

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • Bean Sidhe silver member
    May 29, 2008

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    Lovely

    I always find it difficult to make an impact when limited by words. You obviously do not suffer the same. Nicely done & good luck in the contest!