My love for you transcends
beyond soft music, candlelight
kisses and rose petals,
it’s eternal.
Author notes
Credit: Romantic_Dream_by_Mel Gama
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A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 15 Words VIII - by Desire.
700 points, ended June 3, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - - Go for the Gold XI - (Pre-Writes...That's Right) by Desire.
700 points, ended June 15, 2008, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Welcome Back!!
Beautiful
Your piece qualifies and elated to see You back
Best wishes in my contest Sweet Soul!!
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Eternal
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ after inhaling Your words I was seeing the word: crocodile whether creature or metaphor-symbolism
actually seeing the creature with mouth open...for some reason
Also words: Swap Meet-
and feels like the little girl in the picture...I am continually being drawn to her while reading Your words~ something about her dress- what she is wearing
Nudged to mention~ Be Careful...hearing words: Business Deal
Hopefully that makes sense
Powerful images You have brought forth
These words grabbed and pulled~
My love for you transcends,
Beautiful Voice spoken~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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I just love reading your recent work sis. This poem capture the picture beautifully. Keep that muse flowing sis.
Take care x -
very nice quickie, nice words used, best of luck in the contest
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