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we found it burning
our throats, that word’s weight buzzing
from dangling limbs.

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  • blackday
    June 1, 2008

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    9.3

    Ahhh. I love this one too. Definitely one of the more serious ones & I liked that. You didn't let the form change you.


  • acoustical
    May 30, 2008
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    incredible.
    you are
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