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mutual moans




the sun and moon share
the sky, dancing in and out
just like good lovers.

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haiku.
peace to all ~flight

honesty

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  • blackday
    June 1, 2008

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    9.5

    What a sexy take on nature-based haiku. It's so good. That last line just flipped the poem in my mind. great.