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Sincerely and Without Love

Dear Parents

This is letter from someone

who's name you've heard a thousand times

and said more than a million

times more.

This is a letter from someone

you used to know

you used to think you know

But you don't

It's from someone

you'd never recognize

unless you saw their face

It's from someone

with too many secrets

that you'd kick their ass for sharing

It's from someone

who walked to Starbucks

in the rain

and called it the best day of her life

It's from someone

who fucking knows how to fucking cuss

whether you fucking like it or not

It's from someone

who yes, likes boys

and thinks about them

as more than playground rivals

It's from someone

who makes dirty jokes

and hears at least ten a day

It's from someone

who wishes they could sexy dance

and knows a couple people that can

It's from someone

who has her own set of problems

Someone you'll probably never know

And come to think of it

you probably wouldn't want to know her anyway

It's from someone

who will come and go

and you'll never know.

Sincerely Yours,

Fourteen year old Kayla Bryanon

Sincerely Yours and without love,

Your Daughter

Author notes

P.S. It's probably a good thing I'm not sending this letter
Because you'd look at it and say three things
1) Of course we know you, you're our daughter, you're our little girl!
2) You're grounded for life! Where did you learn such profanity?! We are ashamed of you!
3) Is your homework done? Did you clean your room?

Thanks mom and dad. I love you too. That last part there was a thought I added to my poem, but it isnt really poetic, so I put it here as an afterthough type thing. This ones for you mother and father. Enjoy.

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Comments

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  • RandomSkittle
    June 29, 2008

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    AWESOMETASTIC!!!1

    oh and good job
    it's really awesome!
    i'm just sayng that it's not exactly like u (all ur pent up anger.... where the heck do you store it!!!)

    • Kayla Bryanon
      July 15, 2008
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      everyone has a dark side. the differance is where you choose to put it.


  • RandomSkittle
    June 29, 2008
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    wow kiki


  • Goldpiranhafinch
    June 6, 2008
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    That didn't turn out right. The face was supposed to be angry.

  • Goldpiranhafinch
    June 6, 2008
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    Now, Miv, I resent that. You were talking about me, I know it. You too, Kayla. JERKS! I GET BACK FROM YELLOWSTONE, AND THIS IS ALL I GET?!?!?!? CALLED A NAZI?!?!?!?!? Great poem by the way. Eres Kiki? Pienso que si, pero yo no se. If you are, WHAT THE *bleep* DO YOU MEAN, YOU CAN'T WRITE POETRY?!?!?!?!?!? You lied to me! >


  • TwilaTarragon
    May 29, 2008
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    Ok, for one thing, you know I love this poem, and I think it's really good and really relatable, but you might want to proofread it. fourth line: "and said more than a million" more than a million what? and spell check, please, before the grammer nazi gets you. You and I both know that she will give you heck. Great write though!!!! keep writing!!!

    -Twila

    • Kayla Bryanon
      June 3, 2008
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      hey, thanks for commenting. i did the spell chack, u prolly saved my behind. that grammar natzi would have got me good. i tried to fix that fourth line that was issueful, but its late, and i did a very sucky job, so sorry about that. ill fix it later. luv ya! oh yea. email me.

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