I don't believe in abortions no good can become of them.
There are so many women who think that it will solve their problem.
If only they would think that they are murdering a little baby.
That someone else could have and love in there place.
A unborn child has a heart beat after two weeks.
Killing anything with a heart beat is murder to me.
A person never knows how precious a baby can be till they lose one.
Trust me I know how precious a baby can be I lost one two years ago.
That's why I strongly disagree with abortions it's just murder.
Why kill a baby someone else could love instead.
A contest entry
- Abortion. by DAMSELx.
450 points, ended June 15, 2008, 38 entries
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You need to work on your flow, and learning how to write with more powerful languages and words, this is about a strong topic, but you don't make someone feel anything different than what they've already read on a billboard.
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Well if you read my page you would know I just started writting poetry. So dont be downing me cause you belive in abortions.
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I wasn't trying to down you,
I hadn't read your profile,
I'm sorry, just trying to give the most helpful tip that was ever given to me.
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You have stated your beliefs well sis!! Alot of time women aren't aware of all of their options and go with the first one presented to them. Best of luck in the contest.
Crystal
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Because of your background (losing a baby) you have a different and genuine perspective of abortion that many other women do not have.
It is those who have lost something who can see what others are taking *for granted*, in this case, the life of a baby.
Thank you for your entry and for your personal stance on this delicate topic,
--DAMSEL -
I might take this more seriously if you could spell properly, but I love hearing other people's views on things, so I liked this. I don't think, however, that ANYONE should be forced into an unwanted pregnancy or that someone who doesn't want kids will automatically get all excited to be a mother. Honestly, if I found out I was pregnant right this minute, I'd already be on my way to an abortion clinic. Good can come of abortions for many-- personal freedom, not being a host to a parasite, less money wasted on useless kids, etc.
Nice thoughts, though. Could use some backing up with facts or actual poetic devices, but like I said, I enjoy others' opinions. Good luck in that contest.
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Interesting point of view
This is an interesting point of view because many times not all the choices are made available to the women. If they knew someone would love the child they wish to abort maybe they would change their minds.
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