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There

Sweet little sprite,
where's your meadow gone?
Just a window away from where you belong.

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piture prompt

A contest entry

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  • Desire gold member
    June 2, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: There
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ after taking in Your words~ Wild as it may sound..I kept hearing: Pepsi
    and Oy~ was also getting what sounded like Banana Nut Bread
    Kept hearing word: Emeril for some reason~
    Nudged to mention this is very Creative-
    reference to window away
    Hopefully that makes sense
    Powerful images You have brought forth

    These words grabbed and pulled~
    Sweet little sprite
    Wonderful Voice spoken~

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • VoltaicHypnosis gold member
    May 30, 2008

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    Interesting... poor sprite, locked away from its fresh meadow... I like the 'hidden' depth... good job.