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Paint Me A Picture




Broad, muscular shoulders
A nice 6-pack stomach
Strong legs and arms

His obsession turns corrupt....


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That was too funny!

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  • daviscth
    May 30, 2008

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    This is a wonderfully created response to the picture prompt. I just love the ending line. LOL. Thanks so much for posting.


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    May 30, 2008

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    awesome ! thanks for a fun read
    you did a great poem and in 15 words
    Good luck in the contest
    Julie


  • Iridessa MoonFlower
    May 29, 2008

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    Oh my I don't know what picture to look at your background or the one on top. Both of them are hot. Of course my favorite part was, "His obsession turns corrupt...." Doesn't always anyways? Sometimes I think that they we're just born that way. Most of them anyway. You painted a really nice picture here with your words & I can't say it enough... PICTURES! Ah so hot. Good luck in the contest. ♥ ~~Shannon~~


  • Lil-Bit Crazy
    May 29, 2008

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    OMG is he looking for it....... funny pic and awesome poem... thanks for sharing and good luck in your contest here.....