I believe i have powers
Or maybe i dont?
I can't really concentrate
Wait...
This reckless behavior has gone to far
Im superwoman
Im spiderman
Now ontop of this car
Im feeling kind of sad
Oh forget it im happy
I use to love running
Guess i dont like it anymore
Im wallowing in my own self pity
Im ready to die
Hmm...
Suicide?
PLEASE JUST STOP TALKING!
JUST LEAVE ME ALONE!
MY THOUGHTS ARE ALL RACING!
AND IM UNSURE WHERE TO GO!!
..........what do you mean calm down?
Im what...
Bipolar
No this can NOT BE!
im not crazy!
IM NOT!...
wait...
am I?
Author notes
bipolar
option4
zombiefiedmonkeycheese
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hmmm..
not really what I was looking for but good poem -
hmmmm...
...well...good poem....Its not really what I wanted but overall good...good luck! -
Wow
this is a conversation thats happened in my head many many times. I think you pinned it down on paper really well, so well done
The flow was a little dodgy at times, but overall. I really like it. I love how the story progresses through the poem, like going from a mania or hypomania phase to the depressed episode
ITs crazy
but thats life
thanks for the entry
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This is amazing!
I like how you were questioning if you had bipolar and at the end ask yourself "am I?"
This is a really great poem!
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Absolutely awesome! You hit the nail on the head my friend. Love the manic pacing. I just want to read it over and over- faster and faster... better be careful
Keen introspection! Very nice! 
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