Hot label,
Sprayed his lustful scent,
Tempting a harem,
So dazzling at the scene,
But wait,
His briefs look empty,
Manhood has become depleted,
Oh what a disappointment,
As he glances down below.
Author notes
Obsession for Men !
A contest entry
- #83 Adult picture prompt by daviscth.
300 points, ended June 12, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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ROFL this is so funny LOL.. I absolutely love the last 3 lines. poor chap.. the look upon his face probably would be priceless.. ha ha.. great job with prompt.. I saw this and I just think I may enter..
good luck in the contest
k
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LOL!!!! Great job!!! The last three lines are so good. Thanks for posting.
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Aww poor guy 
Classic!! Wickedly cool write!
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Aww I know poor guy
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Haha.. This was just soo funny.. It was all sensual and enticing in the begining..And then the ending put a big twist on it..Lol.. I really loved this.. Best of luck!!
Angel
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Well he looks hot then he is not
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Hehe.. yeah he does
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Deflated !! lol x
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Hehehe this made me smile, wonderful take on the pic hunni, I love it! All the best in the contest with it
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thanks xx
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