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Angry. Very, Very Angry.

Fucking and dying,
That’s all that we do.
Fucking and dying,
And shitting too.


Trashing our earth with our cars and our shit
Then shoving out babies to continue it.
Death and taxes,
So they say, are as inevitable
As the end of the day.

But I say…


Fuck Taxes!
Death and Fucking,
Dying and Kids.
Those are the real truths.
They go on without pause,
Without break.
Fucking and Shitting,
Then dead in the ground.
Fuck up the world,
You won’t be around
To see the results,
Leave it to your kids,
Its their fault anyway
If we hadn’t been so busy
Creating their lives
We could have saved the planet.
But we didn’t.

Fucking and Dying,
Shitting too,
Cycle of evil,
Cycle of doom.

Necessary but
Cataclysmic.


We sure fucked it up big.

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Holy Hell, i was angry when i wrote this,
it is pretty shitty, but i still like it...

If you don't like this.... Good For You!

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  • machiavel
    July 2, 2008

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    I won't be a lying shit like most people on AP: it isn't poetic, but I can definitely relate to the anger in this, and it's so, so true. I hate people and their lovely (*snark*), complacent ways just as much as you seem to do.

    Some of this reminded me of the rabbit song, which goes something like this: "they eat and fuck and eat and fuck and fuck and shit and eat."

    -Cristina

  • WritingWretch silver member
    May 31, 2008

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    Brilliant as the Brits say

    meaning very good. Puts me in mind of the former poet laureate of England, Philip Larkin's piece "this be verse "
    'They fuck you up,your mum and dad
    they may not mean to but they do.
    They fill you with the faults they had.
    And add some extra just for you....'
    You may want to look it up. He was piss off too, that's what made him extraordinary. I think you might enjoy. Sorry, I like it, (Your rant poem) might as well write myself off as a human being right now. Cheers, April  


  • acari27 gold member
    May 30, 2008
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    Sex and death-you and Woody Allen would get on like a house on fire

  • emLeejo
    May 29, 2008
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    haha interesting.

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