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Secrets in the Summer

having fun in the sun
watching you in barely nothing
running my hands up and down
thoughts always running through

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what do you think of it i think i maybe should change it

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  • Justin
    June 2, 2008

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    this poem made me giggle. it sounds like a description of me. :-P The words you penned were perfectly chosen, and they really helped get the message across. Great write!


  • idkwhoiam
    June 1, 2008

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    aww I like it

    yea I really like this poem.... I cant wait for this summer and I think that this really shows what its like for alot of people