You are a cloud
When I look up at the clouds
I see a face that is you
When I look away from the clouds
The face goes away
You are a fluffy cloud
That never goes away in my thoughts
I Love You
You are a cloud
That cries when I am sad
You are a cloud
You are a cloud in the sky
That makes me happy
When I look up at you
You are a cloud always in my thoughts
I Love You
How does this make you feel?
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VERY UPLIFTING !!!!!
As I read this I feel like I am on that cloud, floating and looking down upon the earth, with not a care in the world.
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This is so childlike and innocent in it's expression.Great!
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Excellent!
Very creative piece here! A dedication to ones ability to dream and feel the emmencepower of love within one self. Harness it, it is what life is all about. Great poem! Don
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So SWEET
I love this one it truly is a sweet write .
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All Glowing!
The beauty of this I find is that the 'cloud' can represent any beloved. Creature, person, or most universal and large of all God.
You haven't defined what is loved here, only that it is loved. This is wonderful, as readers will reflect in the 'cloud' whatever they wish, that they love most.
This is magically wonderful... truly!
A simple little treasure to find, I love it.
Sol
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very dreamy,
so lovely.
God bless...
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Always in my mind...You are the cloud that only I can see. Awesome write! ~Sie
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