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Spring Break with Charity and Vanity

As textbooks temporarily close,
beachside debauchery breaks
in spring.

Tuition also covers intoxicated
venues. Because look closely,
they're our future.

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  • MahoganyFlow
    May 29, 2008

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    "Tuition also covers intoxicated
    venues." You always give me one line that just pops out. Love how you think sometimes. I don't realize how much my mind is closed until I read one of your poems. Good job on this one. Good luck. Keep writing


  • Aerden gold member
    May 29, 2008
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    The sad thing is, this is so true.