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Lies this memory

Inside the leather cover
Of a book,
Lies this memory:

A joint in the wind full
Of excuses that inspire,
Life giving words
That you reap and require.
Emotion fortresses
Engulfed in fire.

I’m…

Refusing to
Take societies strand
Addicted to the
Consumptions at hand
These scenes are
My houses of demand,
Where I listen
To the lessons of the land…

I’ve…

Gotta’ listen to
The reggae to stay alive,
Must live a life
Of blues, to survive
Smoke a joint
Anti sober, to revive
These wounds of
Age, towards I strive!

Input for the output
To suffer is to create,
To spread anger is
To spread your hate,
Listen to the
Counting clocks of fate
To count up,
The time you’ll
wait.
You’re just waiting for
                                    Your
                                            Turn
                                                  To Speak…

Author notes

Just a little song we're working on with a sort of reggae feel to it.

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  • Stoneface Gremlin
    June 2, 2008

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    Blown away

    It is madness to comprehend just how good this is. I don't know where the spark for this came from but, it is an inferno now. This isn't a great job because your older works were great. This one blows them away. It seems like a new style that you are writing in and I love it.


  • checkmate
    May 29, 2008

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    woah. this is awesome. deep lyrics full of meaning...ooh I love this dear. It is great! I love this:

    Gotta’ listen to
    The reggae to stay alive,
    Must live a life
    Of blues, to survive

    amazing awesome work. I love the read. You have written this so well

    much love,
    checkmate.