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Flaws In These Scars

Flaws, flaws thats all you see
Haven't you no faith in me?

They are not just embedded in my skin
They are everywhere inside
I said I'd stop
And I did
So why do you still cry?

Stop pretending
That you care
Its hard enough
To live through your stare
And living isn't worth a lie
When you cry a lullaby

Flaws, flaws thats all you see
Haven't you no faith in me?

I know what I said
And I said what I meant
And I can see now that your mind is bent
You think I'm still cutting
Are you blind?
Do you think I have no mind?

I show you my arms everyday
And then you have to look away
I don't have an idea what I've done
After all,
For scars I've won
And I can't seem to get this through your head
Believe me for once
New scars don't embed
Themselves into my skin

And
Flaws, flaws thats all you see
Haven't you no faith in me?

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  • XNevermindX
    May 30, 2008

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    Hmmm, i like the last section, its so..... emotive.....you can say. Dont we all know how this feels to some extent.


  • phynix
    May 29, 2008

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    i kno how this feels, sometimes, no matter how much u try to prove to someone u r not, or dont do something, no matter what u do to try to make them realize otherwise, they still wont believe it

  • razorbladz
    May 29, 2008
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    i know how you feel