You slashed my life apart,
and broke the soul into a void.
Nothing will ever set me free again
because you won't let it be so easy.
The kiss given to me was poisoned,
and yet you kept it up until the end.
Lying on my grave site I open my eyes,
so I may see the starry night one last time.
To my surprise my eyes find your face instead,
yet I can't feel the love that was once there...
Author notes
Prompt - Ashen Tears
10 lines
BG picture were collected from Deviantart.com
The first -http://westia.deviantart.com/art/sorrow-longing-tears-17499422
The second - http://lonelypierot.deviantart.com/art/to-die-of-tears-73204186
A contest entry
- 15/10 PIF (prompt up) by Lady Australis.
800 points, ended June 12, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What to do in an insane world?
Comments
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww sending
and lots and lots of them....... great write... thanks for sharing and gooood luck in contest..!
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a good poem, ah kisses again - like you just mentioned, and who is to say if you did open a pw contest that i would enter that poem
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this was amazely deep and sad with a twist of love
i like it
we;ll done n goodluck
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