Our shadows warmed each other that night,
long ago.
It was so right, but
to their eyes it was wrong.
Time never swallowed that memory,
us watching the stars dance in the sky.
The scent is tranquil in every moment I live,
the secret is motionless in your eyes.
Your love is still weightless over my skin.
It will never die.
A contest entry
- ♥.* -Prompt- *.♥ yey please enterr! by With Broken Wings.
525 points, ended October 8, 2008, 18 entries
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Comments
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My oh my! Brilliant write, I absolutely loved it.. Very bold and strong.. Loved your interpretation of my prompt.. Good luck and thank you for entering!
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Hey! Thank you for entering.. Your prompt/title options are:
-"Rain Clouds at the Pijama Party"
-"Love is the Moment"
-"It's not up to me anymore
If you want me in your life
You'll find a way to put me there"
take it however and wherever you'd like =] Good luck!
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