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Rose Caress

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Let your hand fall tender
as I offer my surrender
shivering
quivering
wanting to be captured
by your love enraptured
kiss me deep
make me weep
lock my handcuff
love me rough
bound by your desire
my soul’s on fire
caress me like a rose
just so my heart knows.

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  • Ithica silver member
    June 2, 2008

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    The perfect blend of contasting imagery!!! A fine piece!!! Thank-you for entering! cia


  • Bean Sidhe silver member
    June 1, 2008

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    Perfect!

    The combination of soft & seductive with rough & hard, absolutely perfect! The lines: "kiss me deep / make me weep / lock my handcuff / love me rough " WOW.


  • Carolyn
    May 30, 2008

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    This is amazing.
    it reminds me of a personal experience in life.
    i am sure alot of people can realate.
    Very Creative.